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PostSubject: Child of the Streets   Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:01 pm

This poem was written very much on the spot. I think that I initially wrote it on a tissue, actually (don't ask me how it did not rip apart; I have no clue). I will not tell you what it is about, or how you should feel about this poem, because I am sure that you can make the judgments for yourself.

Child of the Streets
Sitting on the sidewalk

No place to go

Wrapped in bundles

Never thick enough to keep me warm


I look up at strangers

My eyes asking for food

But they just turn and walk away

As if I don't exist


I've got my younger sisters in the alley

And no parents to feed us

So I'm out here

In the cold

Keeping us from going hungry


But it never works

Our stomachs are always rumbling


We've got no home

We move every night

Trying to find a place to stay

With food and warmth and light


I'm a child of the streets

Always invisible

Now matter how I long to been seen

And given a helping hand
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PostSubject: Re: Child of the Streets   Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:21 pm

I don't really know what to say ... I uhh—good job! It got me off on a thinking road that I don't often travel Smile

Thanks for that! It's a great poem Smile



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PostSubject: Re: Child of the Streets   Fri Dec 19, 2008 6:58 pm

Huh. Reminds me of one of those Verse Books, like the kind Ellen Hopkins writes.
I like it:) And the fact that you randomly wrote it makes it even better.
Thinking wise..it made me think of my mom as a kid. And that kid with the sock from Brent's poem(I just read it).
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PostSubject: Re: Child of the Streets   Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:57 pm

Spontaneity is always a good thing.

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PostSubject: Re: Child of the Streets   Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:02 pm

Who is that...? I don't know because it just says guest.
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PostSubject: Re: Child of the Streets   Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:56 pm

It's a person who had an account, but deleted it.

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